Friday, June 03, 2011

Our Ladybug Book

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This is the book my first grade class wrote together. We did it in a pretty short time period because the end of the year is looming and I want them to have time to write their own books.

I do know that there are a few errors (predators are not things that eat plants) but we fixed so many things I let a couple slide.

I love the About the Author page. A few kids wrote that completely on their own and my only contribution was to help edit it for spelling and punctuation. Actually, they wrote it all on their own and I helped with organization and editing.

I love first graders!

2 comments:

The Science Goddess said...

Fabulous! As I hear them read and review your post, I can't help but think that you must have really enjoyed the great gains in their learning and abilities this year. Go, Jen!

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